Saturday, May 12, 2012

After getting to the part where he says they're basically people too, I had a kiss for them. That's right, a kiss. I have kisses for a lot of chapters that never get put in - sad. But then, it might possibly ruin the plot if I have them kiss too soon... then again, they ARE going on a date (with confused statuses, not to mention). The kiss went like this:
Hermione flew at him, and her star was squished between her abdomen and Draco's as she kissed him with force. She felt her own heart barely able to flutter at the amount of electricity streaking through every vein in her body - it was overwhelming. His touch, his feel, the way his body moulded perfectly into hers was stimulating. Her star throbbed with something else - she could feel his heartbeat, perfectly in time with the necklace's magic gem, pulsing against her breast. She understood; she got a piece of his heart. He'd given her a literal piece of his heart. She was honoured and flustered at the same time, and her mouth was penetrated by his tongue. His skin was uncommonly cool beneath her as they tumbled into the wall, and her leg hitched itself around his waist.
Cool, right? Ignore the blacked-out section, it'll be explained later. And I think I'll start using subtitles for the individual info for each chapter. It'll be better that way - easier to understand when new info comes along, and isn't just a continuation of the previous info.
Again, thank you to everybody who reads my story! You fill my heart with joy and it makes me soar above metaphorical clouds. Cheesy, but true. Thanks and keep up here! I try and upload every day, so don't stop checking!

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